Unwritten Soul


A Light Through Your Heart - Poem by Unwritten Soul

I see a light
A light through your heart
The special heart glows in the dark
Warm me with your melodious heartbeat tonight
Sweetly kill the quietness of the night
Come and inspire me for a of song
A song of love with sound of heartbeat
Could you stay a while
Help me finish the song for you
With the hope we still together for long
So i have a chance to sing you
A song of a every night
My love song


Comments about A Light Through Your Heart by Unwritten Soul

  • Hassan Hayati (7/26/2017 1:48:00 AM)


    could you stay a while, the romantic verse, full of love, (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (7/26/2017 5:44:00 AM)

    To be honest when i was writing this poem, it just hitting my head to be written, but i am glad it now stand as one poem that light many hearts, thanks dear :) keep it up for your nice poetry tooo :)

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  • (7/10/2017 9:59:00 AM)


    Intensely romantic.
    Lovely sentiments elegantly expressed.
    Wonderful!
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  • Adilson Pinto (6/21/2017 8:18:00 AM)


    hahahaha! I don't think I'd break your ribs at all! But it is a pleasure to catch your attention and friendship! Thank you so much! Success for you always! ! ! (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (6/24/2017 6:51:00 AM)

    You're welcome n again thanks to you again for warm words, may u always success n feel content of what life offer to your life, with blessing n happiness breathing around your soul, take care

  • Adilson Pinto (6/20/2017 8:40:00 AM)


    A poem full of sweet feeling, tenderness and love... Only poets can say these words how they are said..... Beautiful at all! Thank you for your visit in my HP page! ! ! A strong hug from Brazil! (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (6/21/2017 5:41:00 AM)

    Your sweet words also resonate here, thank you sir... And thank you for strong hug just dont break my ribs haha joking :)

  • (6/20/2017 8:01:00 AM)


    How utterly lovely!
    An eternal love song, eternally sung.
    Incredible poem!
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    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (6/21/2017 5:39:00 AM)

    Love song for all lovely people n friends, and so it goes to u too :)

  • Genova Maaa (6/15/2017 12:16:00 AM)


    inspire me for a of song
    A song of love with sound of heartbeat
    every night i want to hear this song of the heart.
    what a fine poem full of desire and passion. thank you dear poetess. genova
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    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (6/15/2017 2:06:00 AM)

    Thanks for reading, the world is a blend of desire and passion though.. so us too

  • (6/7/2017)


    A glowing heart, a passionate heart. I think it is remarkable that you tie these elements to light, to love. So much has been written about dark hearts, about hearts embroiled in the extremes of passion. Perhaps your heart, the heart of light, is the one that captures joy. Well done, Soul. (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (6/9/2017 5:09:00 AM)

    And your words are so generous to me like a celestial background for my eyes and smile to witness this. Thank you dear MJ Lemon.. :)

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/26/2016 5:08:00 AM)

    In The Dark
    Glows! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Jr Cuyam (12/13/2016 9:06:00 PM)


    THe special heart glows in the dark. Beautifully recognized light. (Report) Reply

  • Offeliya Seema (11/18/2016 8:49:00 AM)


    I see a light
    A light through your heart
    The special heart glows in the dark
    Warm me with your melodious heartbeat tonight
    Sweetly kill the quietness of the night
    Come and inspire me for a of song
    A song of love with sound of heartbeat
    Could you stay a while
    Help me finish the song for you
    With the hope we still together for long
    So i have a chance to sing you
    A song of a every night
    My love song

    very nice poem, thank you for sharing this poem with us
    (Report) Reply

  • Rebecca Navarre (11/14/2016 8:28:00 PM)


    Oh! ! ! How Beautifully Breath Taking! ! ! Makes Me Smile
    To Think Such Beautiful Love In The World! ! ! Thank You
    So Much For Sharing This! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! 10s! ! !
    (Report) Reply

  • Mihaela Pirjol (6/8/2016 8:15:00 AM)


    This is a tender invocation of the muse, or a romantic calling of the beloved. Which ever it is, made this poem - Fantastic! (Report) Reply

  • Christopher Tye (6/2/2016 8:33:00 AM)


    Wonderfully written as always. Love can illuminate even the darkest of hearts. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (6/2/2016 3:29:00 AM)


    Come and inspire me for a of song
    A song of love with sound of heartbeat
    Could you stay a while............ i shall sing to you, to my hearts content....... thank you for this wonderful, emotional love poem . tony
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  • (5/9/2016 9:17:00 AM)


    This is the shortest of the three I've read this afternoon, but no worse for that. There is the gentle sound of a heartbeat echoing through your work and find it irresistible as poetry. by the way do you write French verse too?
    Tom billsborough
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    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (5/10/2016 12:14:00 AM)

    Im still self learning French a lil bit hahaha, i love to learn it. Eventhough i feel sorry for my English hahahaha..Thank you Tom, this is by far was my fastest work i ve done in 10-15mins where that time i was got hit by the words in my brain again and again hahahaha. Thanks again Tom

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (8/22/2015 7:37:00 AM)


    Come and inspire me for a of song
    A song of love with sound of heartbeat
    Could you stay a while
    Help me finish the song for you. i liked these expressions in your poem. thank you.
    (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur (8/27/2014 3:01:00 AM)


    A beautifuuly written a romantic song what I loved for it's simplicity (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (5/8/2014 1:42:00 AM)


    Beautifully written by a romantic Soul who puts his heart to all that he does bringing light through to all. Thank You Soul (Report) Reply

  • Chris G. Vaillancourt (5/4/2014 3:31:00 AM)


    this poem flowed like a river...good strong writing (Report) Reply

  • Yash Shinde (4/4/2014 11:25:00 PM)


    ......a touching write.really romantic and wonderfully composed........ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 8, 2010

Poem Edited: Sunday, October 6, 2013


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