Unwritten Soul

Desert Rose - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Bring the lost back to the right path
Desert rose with the silence voice
Whispering in the calm scented air
Mesmerizing, captivating, a guidance
Perfume sight for blinded eyes, in the sandy breeze
Trails the hopes to find way home
Back to the place of attraction
The hidden ambitious land
In the Secret garden of oasis

Trusted voice with hidden beauty
Miles away, spraying your spirit to the air
Taste the mist of fumes, language of mystery
The fragrance essence, invisible guide within the air
Natural elixir to heal mirages curse
Revealing there are the illusion images
Awakening sanity, miraculously sober
We'll see the truth of the truth

Disperse sweetest fumes, a silky touch
Now the land hypnotized under your spirit
Soften your soul with blossom smiles
Preserve your beauty with innocent fair
Thorns be ultimate sword, guard your pride
Protect life from harmful touch of enemy eyes

Desert rose,
Unveil us the secret of life
As the only softness will survive when life is so hard
Soft as water, gentleness not easily broken, a lesson
The smell of you may call thousands souls back
Among of them most will care, a little will scare
You dont cry when the evil hands break you a part
After all you lead them safe from lost
Brokenness they made,
But your fragrance lingering in hands
Haunting them back

Rare persona... in you desert rose
In the sandy ocean, you devote for better life,
Amazing grace based on your strongest will
Days without rain while the sun vapor the strength
Resistant but beauty even the land is burning thee
Root of hopes now stronger to find water deeper
True charisma, exist in you, desert rose

Comrades by twinkling stars and moon smiles
The night seems brighter by your whispering melody
Lullabying desert with sweet enchanting fragrance
Lay in frozen curse, stay strong to stand all night long
Strong stormy sand, covering your remark
Change the hills, dust on your body,
Thirst of the better life
Standing still there,
Your smile intact in the layers,
The bud never broken before bloom

Like us you not strong for all time
One day your smiles will broken, by a hand or storm
One by one the petals depart till all gone
All petals lost, follow the wind journey in a far distance
Flying, kissing the sand and fall to the ground
Finally you vapored and dried but wont surrender
That's not over as the fume wont decay
Never stop to give up for any reason, no way
Fragrance soul cant be defeated, killed in any way

Blessing gift in the desert
Your immortal spirit back revisited
Here in secret garden of oasis
With devotion for better life, desert rose keep survive
Broken will replaced, come new buds, each will bloom
Smile again, the beauty with enchanting fumes
Lead the lost back home again
You rose once, and will rise one more time
Share your glory till the summit of sand hill
Desert Rose, the soul perfume of serenity
Live your life with strong, soul's spirit truly

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About Desert Rose:
Why rose? (Rose come from word rise, haha, beauty n great fumes)
Not like other roses, this rose live in oasis
The smell is a voice, silence with sounds
Center in the desert, the spirit within is stronger like the smell it has
In our life there's obstacles and illusion around us
Just like the desert rose, the nature guidance of life
facing the mirages, a lot of illusion that fool our mind
or the hardness when people broken your soul or even
When surrounding inhibit your freedom...
I learn from desert rose to keep soul and spirit win
The smell will show where to go, back to oasis the where they came from
In windy, sandy breeze we cant see clearly..more than that the scenery in desert
all look the same, a field of sand, where to go? ? ? like blind people
to find a way alone without a stick, if we be like a desert rose
the undying spirit and soul, we will have opportunity to finish.
The desert rose perfume signal the hope that the destination to go
the spirit should never die and if it die we will forever lost
in hopelessness...Even people keep you down and down
no matter what you give to them, the smell of fragrance cant
be killed by sword, and the smell is the spirit...devotee for better life
Once again, nature taught me about life...Rose symbol of beauty and fumes
we must be soft but not easily broken, if broken revive the new hope
Thanks for reading_Unwritten Soul

Next Rise from the Ashes poem collection
3: Burning Goodbye
4: Night whisperer
5: Rise from ashes
6: Ethereal Broken
7: Estranged in Mirage

Comments about Desert Rose by Unwritten Soul

  • (6/9/2017 1:52:00 PM)

    Magnificent work, Soul. The rose can be the metaphor for the one, the individual, the person. CAn the sand be the metaphor for the many- -the crowd, the mob, the unresponsive elements of humanity that often surround the sentient being? That one rose, standing aside, standing alone, may be teh one that offers hope, strength, and resolve. This is a terrific poem, Soul. (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (6/10/2017 5:37:00 AM)

    My humble thank you to you dear, your words are kind and a bless like rain in desert..Yes that's the meaning i wanted to tell, although i always worry that readers may not understand that but when you say it all, i feel relief because i am not born to be a good writer, i just a dreamer, love to think and to share...it is a long poem and you go through it...Thanks dear, i sincerly appreciate it, each of your kindness to me :)

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  • Rebecca Navarre (11/3/2016 10:52:00 PM)

    Oh My Goodness! ! ! ! ! I Don't Know Where To Began! ! ! Except What A Wonderously Beautiful Poem! ! ! ! !
    Beautifully Written! ! ! ! So Moving! ! ! Love Thoughts And Feelings! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! And The Wonderful Description! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    Thank You Sooo Dearly For Sharing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10s! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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  • (8/2/2016 7:12:00 AM)

    this poem has made the tears roll down my face really enjoyed reading it (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (8/2/2016 9:32:00 AM)

    Awww thank you Sharron for your sweet words, wipe the tears and move life to it fullest mode

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (7/25/2016 10:34:00 AM)

    A rich reflection of a rose that surges with the splendor of succes that swims through the swamp. Well done my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Richard Jarboe (7/2/2016 11:26:00 AM)

    Dandelions are taproots. Taproot motto: You can rip us up but you can't get rid of us. Good job,
    (Report) Reply

  • Richard Jarboe (6/16/2016 9:17:00 AM)

    Roses turn to garbage and garbage turns to roses. Good job,
    (Report) Reply

  • Richard Jarboe (6/16/2016 9:15:00 AM)

    Strong image understanding of the nature of our existence. Good work,
    (Report) Reply

  • Christopher Tye (5/24/2016 7:21:00 AM)

    Wonderful work, you can almost smell the scent of the Desert rose in the air. (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (5/24/2016 11:42:00 PM)

    Thank you Christopher, the scent is never there but in your kind mind...thank you :)

  • (5/22/2016 4:56:00 AM)

    A marvellous sequence of images centred on the Desert Rose.
    I can't think of a better poem than this on the site, unless one of your own.
    maybe your name means Desert Rose.
    Tom billsborough
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    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (5/24/2016 11:40:00 PM)

    Thank you Tom for your sweeeeet sweet honey encouraging words....made me happy...

  • (3/15/2016 2:33:00 AM)

    Beautifuil poem. wonderful imagination. dev (Report) Reply

  • Simone Inez Harriman (2/21/2016 2:51:00 AM)

    Absolutely stunning....I could see and feel the spirit....10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Kewayne Wadley (2/17/2016 11:57:00 AM)

    The night seems brighter by your whispering melody
    Lullabying desert with sweet enchanting fragrance
    Lay in frozen curse, stay strong to stand all night long

    Lovely written! Strong show of emotion.
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  • (8/25/2014 6:00:00 AM)

    Beautiful. I t intrests the brain and the imagination. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (7/30/2013 9:43:00 PM)

    a good metaphor. enjoyed the read. if broken revive the new hope (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (7/28/2013 2:17:00 AM)

    Soften your soul with blossom
    Preserve your beauty with innocent
    Thorns be ultimate sword, guard
    your pride
    Protect life from harmful touch of
    enemy eyes
    Desert rose,
    (Report) Reply

  • (4/8/2013 6:31:00 PM)

    Desert Rose is a magnificent metaphor!
    (Report) Reply

  • Colin Bradley (10/17/2012 2:37:00 AM)

    WOW! ! ! ! I LOVE THIS POEM (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (10/12/2012 2:28:00 AM)

    A desert rose, braving adverse and scorching weather continues to shed fragrance in the surrounding air and helps people find their way in the vast ocean of sands! A nice poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (8/16/2012 1:28:00 AM)

    amazing job is done (Report) Reply

  • (7/29/2012 10:46:00 PM)

    very inspirational and philosophical. Beautifully written for something that does not have these characters. Fortune flowers are called as Desert roses. Could you please explain? I am inquisitive, that is all. unwritten soul, I do not know some other flower that has the qualities that you described here. Please enlighten me. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 13, 2011

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 20, 2011

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