Breaking Boundaries Poem by Unwritten Soul

Breaking Boundaries

Rating: 4.6


Cheers of the same glass
Here we live in togetherness
In a classy wine glass or just a table cup
But, still in layers, we never mixed up
As oil and water forever split up

A line of separation
Draw boundary between us
Touch each other surfaces but never hold phases
Never, upside cross the line to reach down
While, impossible is the line, false mind?
Forever isolating us, you and I
As you an oil and me, water

Undelivered lavender fumed words by you
Stayed there without pass the unbreakable line
Never, i know, cant have your adored scent in me
As there is a boundary, a thin door, locked for us
Tried, yes we tried, again and again
Essence of crimson red heart color
Dropped in our shared glass
Tried to be one by persuading our eyes
Hiding the differences of our layers
Again it can't, dissolved in me, unstained you
We stay as two layers of colors and perfume
In a traditional destiny of oil and water

Together we live, but by layers we always be
In a crystal glass or in that old jar
Close enough we are but a line make it far
Here we still, but our life never be one
Because of this boundary, nothing is easy

Expanding our hearts, as yours surfaced on mine
Exchange understanding, transferred between us
Emulsify the boundary, dissolving separator line
Resolving mind, for heart to heart bind
Holding together after found a place to fit
Swirling our souls, breaking all boundaries
As whole applied to share a fumes of lavender
Be in the bliss of red heart, crimson color
The rule of oil and water now is gone
For a mixture of love

Bound heart to heart
Understanding, breaks boundaries
Unison of different classes
Cheer in the same glass
Togetherness, we share life,
Finally, be as one
Just one
A class in a glass
Cheers! !

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a poem that i pushed 'Understanding' as a concept of living, Living in togetherness never mean we live all as one. Referring a glass as a place to stay together, i consumed this idea to tell, this world is a glass and countries are layers...No war, just unite as one 'Earthian', even in a country we stay in big community, it sounds like we live as one but no...i always disturbing by the mind that separates our life from staying in togetherness when some issues like different ideology, races and ethnicity, cultures, religion and thinking point out by somebody..even in the same house, it does not guarantee that we having one voice. Understanding is the ultimate one to merge all differences as it carry respect inside too...Differences are beautiful, just like a fume only dissolves in oil(without alcohol) but dyes mostly dissolve in water only, universal solvent... just imagine if we can hold each other don't we have colors and fume...we never get whole when we think we are the superior one. Everything comes with rare abilities, sum up with be in togetherness! come! ! Emulsifier, is used to mixed to phase of oil and water...Food or cosmetic applied this for products but for human who want to emulsify different hearts, understanding is our emulsifier..

I dont want miss a chance to write a poem in the last day of June, so i grab a paper and pencil to write my short idea instantly...but it took a day to finish as i have short time to write. Hope u enjoyed. Be happy and smiley_Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rekha Mandagere 12 July 2012

Sparkling idea and the humble tone of the writer is really soothing. The imagery used here is fantastic.There is everything in togetherness.Lovely concept and I pray God for giving dignified life for all mankind!

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Hamid Negah 29 July 2012

nice poem, One day we see the world with no Boundaries.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 12 August 2012

You are right, there is no 2 person who would understand each other perfectly, because what you see in others, it is in you. If you do not understand them, they will not understand you either.

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Tony Karas 12 December 2012

So incredibly moving! An excellent write.

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Finally, be as one Just one A class in a glass, , , , nice to feel and good to have such will.fine poem...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 August 2017

Bound heart to heart Understanding, breaks boundaries Unison of different classes Cheer in the same glass Togetherness, we share life, Finally, be as one Just one A class in a glass Cheers! ! ..... great theme. I agree with this. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

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Heather Wilkins 04 September 2013

understand breaks boundaries togetherness we share life. good thoughts on life

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Geetha Jayakumar 22 August 2013

Cheers! A class in a glass.. Cheers for the togetherness we share...beautiful poem. Each lines so well expressed. Loved it very much.. Thank you Soul for the inspiring comments for my poems...thanks a lot.

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Farah Ilyas 28 May 2013

Profound Riddle is solved by using simple entities like water, oil, surface, glass etc..wao from where such ideas come in your mind? i am still digging in these lines. Holding together after found a place to fit Swirling our souls, breaking all boundaries As whole applied to share a fumes of lavender Be in the bliss of red heart, crimson color The rule of oil and water now is gone For a mixture of love. i must say that you are not only a poetess but intellectual philosopher also..

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Frank James Davis 07 April 2013

An amazing poetic analogy! Brilliant, Soul!

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