Access Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Access

Rating: 3.7


In a crowded lunch, a wireless chat took place
From soil to sky with a cozy crystal-soul.

A long emotional table
Suddenly became small and small
And all other persons evaporated slowly
We alone looking each other
Butterfly was the witness of that epic!

Is it mere a tale or a composition of dream?
Untold access to an undiscovered world?



Poem 01
Book 'Beckoning Jade-Dreams' April 2007
Copyright Musharrat Mahjabeen
Mizan Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8700-82-X

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brishti Mazumdar 04 June 2009

wow...Ashraful...I loved it...a fiction is told in just few lines....Hummm...I am really loving your miser way of using words....Your thought process will always get my 10++...Your fan Brishti

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Pramod Thomas 03 June 2009

good piece of true fiction

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a heart stirring poem. a good poet.10 shan

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Shashendra Amalshan 30 May 2009

very imaginative indeed...simply great expressions..very nice 10++

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Subroto Chatterjee 05 May 2009

Yes, Its access, just the way poets at PH are doing all the time...welcome tot the cyber world. I liked the 'long emotional table'...getting smaller. Flat, flat universe. Keep on Ashrafu! Cheers. Subroto

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Ejaz Khan 05 July 2009

Not even time can determine which of the possibilities are more probable. A fantastic write!

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Marieta Maglas 20 June 2009

''We alone looking each other Butterfly was the witness of that epic! '' I love this lyric romantic poem and the finer feelings suggested....10++++

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'....chat took place From soil to sky with a cozy crystal-soul' 3 Ss 'Soil, Sky, Soul'...wow...! ! ! a 10+ dr. sakti. Namaskar...India...17.06.09.

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Untold access to an undiscovered world? what an inspiring imagination... nature to nature and what will bethe result...beautiful tale....10

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 15 June 2009

Untold access to an undiscovered world? how nice the line is!

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