In a crowded lunch, a wireless chat took place
From soil to sky with a cozy crystal-soul.
A long emotional table
Suddenly became small and small
And all other persons evaporated slowly
We alone looking each other
Butterfly was the witness of that epic!
Is it mere a tale or a composition of dream?
Untold access to an undiscovered world?
Poem 01
Book 'Beckoning Jade-Dreams' April 2007
Copyright Musharrat Mahjabeen
Mizan Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8700-82-X
very imaginative indeed...simply great expressions..very nice 10++
Yes, Its access, just the way poets at PH are doing all the time...welcome tot the cyber world. I liked the 'long emotional table'...getting smaller. Flat, flat universe. Keep on Ashrafu! Cheers. Subroto
Not even time can determine which of the possibilities are more probable. A fantastic write!
''We alone looking each other Butterfly was the witness of that epic! '' I love this lyric romantic poem and the finer feelings suggested....10++++
'....chat took place From soil to sky with a cozy crystal-soul' 3 Ss 'Soil, Sky, Soul'...wow...! ! ! a 10+ dr. sakti. Namaskar...India...17.06.09.
Untold access to an undiscovered world? what an inspiring imagination... nature to nature and what will bethe result...beautiful tale....10
Untold access to an undiscovered world? how nice the line is!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow...Ashraful...I loved it...a fiction is told in just few lines....Hummm...I am really loving your miser way of using words....Your thought process will always get my 10++...Your fan Brishti