Ashraful Musaddeq

Veteran Poet - 1,233 Points (Aug 16 1958 / Bangladesh)

Adobe Feelings 01 - Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Golden butterflies flying
Winter searching dreamy rose
Cool rainbow feelings

Midnight winter midst
Nocturnal birds crying around
Diary crawl under ribs

Winter smiles at night
Cuckoos consultation meeting
Spring sprouts on time-calyx


Comments about Adobe Feelings 01 by Ashraful Musaddeq

  • (7/26/2009 6:15:00 PM)

    This poem is attesting to imagination of the great format - of course, of imagination of the Poet. Excellent painted images word and competently selected of them 'colours' they cause that the poem is becoming magic and it attracts and charm. Very much I like it and certainly it is deserving the highest note. Greetings.
    Maria Barbara Korynt
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  • (7/26/2009 6:09:00 PM)

    Very interesting written.I like it DA (Report)Reply

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  • Ahmad Shiddiqi (7/22/2009 5:58:00 AM)

    modern, bold, wonderful and simple! ! !
    Dear, poet friend.
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    Best regards,

    Ahmad Shiddiqi
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  • (7/21/2009 9:32:00 PM)

    hi ASHRAFUL...how are you friend..enjoyed this warm poem..is this the case of us all suddenly we will go...see you again..best wishes.. (Report)Reply

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  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (7/21/2009 9:04:00 AM)

    how stylish the construction is! shan (Report)Reply

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  • (7/15/2009 5:24:00 AM)

    ''Golden butterflies flying
    Winter searching dreamy rose
    Cool rainbow feelings''
    Wonderful descriptive poem of nature.Colors are non-verbal communication, by symbolism and generate a physical reaction....10+++ from me
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  • premji premji (7/15/2009 3:57:00 AM)

    you travel along with nature.........
    please read my 'oneryu's from poem no 146
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  • (7/13/2009 12:35:00 PM)

    Scattered ideas, knit well in a small space...conveying the necessary message...wonderful...10++ (Report)Reply

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  • (7/12/2009 1:57:00 PM)

    It was as if I stood beside
    And watched the scene
    As you painted in words!
    So beautiful the night
    That I yearn for it
    In a dream!
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  • (7/12/2009 9:40:00 AM)

    Tenderness of Nature; penned tenderly! (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/12/2009 7:08:00 AM)

    Golden butterflies flying
    Winter searching dreamy rose
    Cool rainbow feelings...... so oneness with nature and its sorrounding... conceptual melody with powerful thoughts.. i admired it.....10

    read mine...slippery ground and serious thoughts.
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  • Priyanka Bhowmick (7/12/2009 6:40:00 AM)

    a natural piece... beautiful n njoyed reading... (Report)Reply

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  • Miriam Maia Padua (7/12/2009 5:11:00 AM)

    very beautiful sight...beautiful imaginations
    beautiful pictures in every verses..
    i love the lines
    10+++

    lovelots,
    maia
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  • (7/12/2009 4:54:00 AM)

    Nice piece sir, Very well imaginations, Express well intimacy of a poet to the nature... (Report)Reply

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  • Raj Arumugam (7/12/2009 4:49:00 AM)

    very vivid imagery and nature is so lovingly observed (Report)Reply

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  • (7/12/2009 4:27:00 AM)

    from that window..where that poet sat watching flowers and many butterflies who cry a red flower stood so high...a beautiful secene through eyes of a poetic brain (Report)Reply

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  • (7/12/2009 3:57:00 AM)

    a fabulous freshly home feelings done...great imagery! 10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • (7/12/2009 3:51:00 AM)

    Nature at work, a soft beautiful write! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 12, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 1, 2009


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