Acting Better Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
Acting Better
Blunders from the past,
From trends they have done
Are such trends they learn
To fix their lives
Highly much better.
They clutch love that last
To yield them as one.
The union them earn
From the good that thrives
Much altogether.
The fixed key so vast
Like the brilliant sun,
That power they yearn
For the love that drives
Them free from woe’s fetter.
Acting better, polishing life today for a better tomorrow with the guidance of the lessons learnt from yesterday...............10+++
I like your flow it reminds me of my work but your work is a bit complex good job
when someone made a mistake, it's no one's fault, just make it better the next time or as the author said, Act better, improve yourself and you'll be a better soul. Well done, mate.
Blunders from the past, From trends they have done Are such trends they learn To fix their lives Highly much better. acting better and learning form the past... it is good experience to learn from the experience...10
Life is a good teacher...the more we learn from life the better...you convey your wise thoughts very nicely there Obinna...thanks...10
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12/5/2025 10:40:39 PM # 1.0.0
Life's lessons... nicely written