Valsa George


Adieu! My Love - Poem by Valsa George

Through the clamour of distressful days
I live alone in soulful memory of my Love
In vain, I keep my door ajar
For her light footsteps, once more to fall

On my lonely bed, I turn around
For her warmth, I shall never here enjoy
Through the dingy corridors, I stray alone
After elusive shadows, I wander forlorn.

I know she is in some far Paradise
Her eyes feasting on the glory of each new dawn
With fadeless flowers blossoming all around
And endless mysteries in all marvel enshrined

Though an emptiness, often engulfs me
I am reminded of the constancy of her love
That she often avowed between tender sighs
As I lay silent on her cleaving breast

I know, I am now a weary traveller
Slouching unsteady towards my journey's end
With stoic endurance, I shall bear
My hefty baggage on these weak shoulders

I, now await the fading of the night
For yet another new dawn to break
To begin life all over anew
To be united evermore with my dainty Love

Till then… till we are one
Adieu! Adieu my little Love! !


Comments about Adieu! My Love by Valsa George

  • Paul Sebastian (5/28/2015 5:47:00 AM)


    So poignant! Longing for your loved one and grieving the loved absence. Beautifully expressed! (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (2/14/2015 1:21:00 AM)


    A sweet poem in memory of someone who left for the paradise at a very young age. (Report) Reply

  • (8/12/2014 1:06:00 PM)


    So beautifully depicted the anguish, pain and reunion and each word adorned with gold having greater feeling
    makes the piece outstanding.........Valsa.......great write
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  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/30/2013 8:49:00 AM)


    Wow. Beautiful poem...Loved reading each lines...So beautifully expressed...Pain, agony and reunited..Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • (12/26/2012 8:40:00 AM)


    The extreme love and agony felt by the lover is graphically and poetically described which is admirable. .A BEAUTIFUL POEM. (Report) Reply

  • (9/30/2012 5:21:00 PM)


    Gorgeous! so delicately put with such thought and obviously so much adoration....tyvm karen (Report) Reply

  • (9/1/2012 11:14:00 AM)


    the pain of loss is filled in those lines.....good poem (Report) Reply

  • (8/21/2012 9:47:00 PM)


    My hefty bagagge on these weak shoulders, just a line which strikes chords and visuals, overall though the poem is written with finess and beautifully compiled tyvm karen (Report) Reply

  • Elena Sandu (8/21/2012 2:43:00 AM)


    Touching poem, so wonderfully written, thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (8/20/2012 1:45:00 PM)


    Stunning write, beautifully written, poignant and emotive. (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (8/20/2012 7:12:00 AM)


    Wow! ! ! ! 'tis such an amazing poem! ! ! !
    I can live through this lines......
    Poetry is at its best time once again with this marvellous poem.....
    I adore your poetic talents! ! ! ! ! ! !
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 18, 2012



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