~ Al Fresco Imagery ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
June 18,2010
Get lost in
Soul sanctuary
Feel in-built finery
Immerse immix with
Al fresco imagery
Dwindle dope all drudgery.
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Glossary: With humility glossary given for what I tried to express.
Al fresco [Italian] ~ In the open air
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So much beauty in so few words. This is a very evocative work. Lovely, indeed.
Dear poet, Thank you so much for giving this concise but meaningful advice to the readers and making easy for poets like us to convey our message to them
Lovely write, it's short but long on thought. The words float but, also serves purpose just like a painting. It does make one search the soul. I enjoyed so much.
What and whose 'truth and freedom' that should 'reign supreme over what is left of the land? ' And, pray tell, what is 'holy basil'? The poem seems to ramble over much terrain so that although one would hope to glean from it, one does get lost. Adeline
Nice, snappy poem assisted by alliteration and rhythms contrasting with traditional, contemplation evoking subject matter. nice poem.
Don't we go beyond all reality and live in that soul sanctuary.
The title of the poem draws the reader in and this finely penned poem holds the reader a willing captive to the very last line. A lovely smooth flow to this well expressed poem! Tfs.............
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice inv we need icons of beauty so as to go beyond.