! Alone Poem by Bob Blackwell

! Alone

Rating: 5.0


Home alone and by oneself,
fed up, a sad unhappy me.
Life offers so little pleasure;
how dull and boring life can be.

Home alone happy by myself,
joyful, contented with just me,
Life offering so much pleasure;
how still and peaceful life can be.



21-06-2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

i thoroughly enjoyed this Bob, . this just shows that wherever we may be and whatever situation we're in, life can be sometimes happy or sad..great one Bob.. :)

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 07 July 2009

You have bledded and homoganized positiveness and lonliness in this short and compact poem and the resultant is a capsule of joy and wisdomful pleasure of life. Simple yet meaningful poem, Bob...........10. Regards Naseer

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Mamta Agarwal 04 July 2009

you have portrayed the duality of life so graphically Bob when alone either we are lonely or enjoy the quiet and solitude. Mamta

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Home alone and by oneself, fed up, a sad unhappy me. Life offers so little pleasure; how dull and boring life can be...... life offers so little.. but home alone offers somany things beautiful write...10 read mine you go alone.....donot kill me.... dreamland and a place called home

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Alf Hutchison 28 June 2009

With age comes wisdom...how often do we all take the negative instead of the positive... very insightful write Bob as only the wise can... best regards Alf

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C. P. Sharma 09 March 2010

Sir, Lonely moments open up window to the self. I wonder why people are afraid of themselves that it torments them. Perhaps the ugly reflection of their make belief doesn't allow then to see their ever blissful self! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! CP

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Sameera Sameer 17 August 2009

ow! ! ! NO Bob you are strong enough! ! just as my friend David Harris said times being alone can be joyful with your thoughts

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David Harris 06 August 2009

Bob, sometimes those times being alone can be joyful with your thoughts and as you said other times not. Great poem my friend Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us. David

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 06 August 2009

Home sweet home. I love the solitude filled with memories, peace and poetry.10.

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Ritty Patnaik 21 July 2009

it is a great idea to enjoy loneliness, by turning it into a fruitful adventure like taking up a hobby, of reading, writing, music or even gardening.it keeps ones mind off other things.very good write.

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