Always Someone Worse Poem by jim foulk

Always Someone Worse

Rating: 4.8


There are times we feel,
like giving up,
empty, drawn out,
life not worth living,
abused, beaten, raped,
nelected, pushed away,
not loved, not wanted,
you can't run away from your problems,
because, where ever you go,
you have to take you with you,
theres a new tomorrow,
things brighter,
happy times will come,
Always someone worse
I was sad cause i had not shoes,
until i saw someone with no feet.
Always someone worse
I was unhappy because i had,
verry little to eat, until
someone i saw with no food to eat,
so remember, no matter how,
bad it is,
Always someone worse
With a new year almost here,
things will be better,
than before, so have,
hope, faith, march on,
into the new year, trusting,
good things, the new year,
will bring.

wrote 12-31-06

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Trade Martin 31 December 2006

Nice work Jim, with a strong message...! ! ! Best, T.M..

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jack russell 01 January 2007

A fine philosophy, jim...we often don't realise just how lucky we are. Top stuff :) Happy New Year jack :)

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Patricia Gale 01 January 2007

Finely penned Jim, thoughts of hope.

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Simple Simon 07 January 2007

What you have said is true. Always man is living on hopes of better tomorrow.

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Carrie Salazar 09 January 2007

Jim, that is very very good and honest and it gives off hope! ! carrie

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Amanda Lukas 31 January 2007

I think it's a fantastic idea for a poem. There's always someone who doesn't have it quite as good as you. It brings one of my favorite epicurus quotes to mind: 'Do not spoil what you have by desiring what you have not; remember that what you now have was once among the things you only hoped for.” I feel like you might have slightly overused commas in an attempt to add a pausing effect. Just a thought!

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Karen Clements 20 January 2007

Think this is something we all should think about Jim! We need to count our blessings! ! Karen x

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Nimal Dunuhinga 14 January 2007

Really a Gem as I see the reality of life, I love this poem very much.

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Newo Enec 13 January 2007

this is so down to earth, so honest and hopeful. i felt like i had faith in what i had again. -Newo

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Brandy O'hair 12 January 2007

i love this poem! so true.

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