Amoeba Messages Poem by Rekha Mandagere

Sound so scientific hahaha I love this piece... :) i agree all people here say but Bernard i want give it double marks :) ..The part of Hanuman make me laugh a little it sounds like a modern tale :) Amoeba Messages? what a title a lil hook there to read :) :) i like and like it more_Unwritten Soul

Beautiful poem indicating the degrading moral values in the society. The rise of cosumerism has pushed back the old values of the society. Today's man is running after wealth and luxuries. He has forgotten his aim why he is sent in this world. I like the way you have composed the whole poem. Very poignant write indeed. Thanks for sharing..... A fine......10

This is so true. Time is such a constant message of speed and a servant of capitalism, I thank God I am not a materialist and my only concern is for a time to dream and create poetry. Thank you for this lovey write. Ron.

a very insightful poem on todays lifestyle. i for one am not an instant message kind of guy. i still prefer a face to face conversation enjoying the beauty of humanity. nicely done

I so agree with you on this poem. We are truly always in a rush it seems. This is a beautifully written poem Rekha! I'm definitely giving it a 10! Thanks for sharing such fine work! Keep it coming.

Amusingly fascinating... Well observed my friend, people give amoebic gifts... Hanuman tales, is it the Hindu God?

Your thoughts are excellent. The imageries keeps the reader agape. Keep writing

witnessing amoeba in terms of time....interestingly knitted.

Time and tide waits for none.Man rush to keep in track with time.This poem highlights the deteriorating moral values in the modern world during the mans rush. Good work.Keep writing.

very well written Rekha :) yes..the man of the stone age lived and enjoyed actually more than us! But I cudnt get..wat ameoba messages is... explain plz..