Looking down on a world
of violence and spite
an angel cries
Cries for the children
in a nation of fears
Cries for the people
who should have been their savior
How can civilization
live like this
This was gods creation
not gods damnation
An angel cries
touching. this is a wonderful poem sir. keep up the good work. i love you
The angel shall ever cry for the children in a nation of fear. xlent and outstanding poem.
Angels always cries, human targets, winning spirits and the desire of being great have turned this world to be the word of pity, we feel sorry for ourselves sir. as I wrote Hear the children crying, the world should cry for itself
Like the poet if there is an Angel within a man, the angel will cry on the violence throughout the world. Loved the poem and loved its message, it has an universal appeal.
Your poem is simple yet deep and full of truths and emotions! Great job!
Well conceived and elegantly brought forth. Thanks for sharing Dave.
How can civilization live like this This was gods creation not gods damnation.So true dear poet........ when we hear and read in the news paper about the murder, bombling, killing of innocents.......... we all cry out God where are you? thank u for this poem. tony
an angel cries, indeed we live in a world where the angel cries. Good write. enjoyed reading.
so touching, and very creatively written