*and I Remember Poem by Reshma Ramesh

oh sweet sad! fine phrasology dear reshma! 10+

Reahma...Congratulations on your publishing.The best of everything for you, young lady! FjR

And you are far away Absent as the rain Still as the desert Never a sign, nor a word Rachel Ann Butler

if it dried like that of the the desert sand....ohhhh Resh.....that is a bad sign :)

Amazing poem Reshma with imagery to die for! 'you dropped at my foot the splintered warmth from your bosom, even the ruffled faith like a broken bamboo'. I will read your poem over and over......10 love Karin

Excellent poem! ! ! ! Elegant write! ! ! !

so tender and nostalgic poem you penned down, a caravan wandering in desert to seek the loving eyes............

your poem reminds me of Thomas Hood's poem 'I remember, I remember' - the ever memorable line 'Absent as the rain Still as the desert Loved to read the poem at least thrice at a breath

This is lovely, Reshma. An interesting and original text with some fascinating phrases that impress and delight this reader. 'Your kisses unfurl the tender mornings' 'the ruffled faith like a broken bamboo' are particularly eloquent. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

it is an amazing piece.. wonderful wording.