M. Asim Nehal

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And My Heart Is Still Crying… - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

You left me
with a purpose to accomplish
I know not
which way to proceed and replenish
My sentiments are swinging
like a pendulum
egoistic battle is on
between heart and mind
neither you offered
the fragment of years
nor filled the devoid
with the resonance of love
I am in doldrums
with no wings to fly
And feeling detached
from worldly things
The silhouette of your love
has formed an aura around me
And I’m unable to come out of
your breathless impasse
And my heart is still crying
To get you back.

Topic(s) of this poem: love and life

Form: Narrative


Comments about And My Heart Is Still Crying… by M. Asim Nehal

  • Rajnish Manga (1/2/2017 3:10:00 AM)


    So emotional and so humane. Loss of someone you love is not easy to forget. Great poem.
    My sentiments are swinging / like a pendulum
    egoistic battle is on / between heart and mind
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (6/30/2016 5:19:00 AM)


    Love and pain! However, hope lies ahead. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Nishi Kumari (1/16/2016 4:13:00 AM)


    Where there is love..there is fear of loosing...and where there is loss....there is pain...nice share (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/23/2015 12:10:00 PM)


    Leaving with purpose of accomplish is very amazing in this nicely drafted poem shared. From worldly things we hold morality of life. Nice sharing.....10 (Report) Reply

  • Ari Alsio (11/23/2015 12:00:00 PM)


    when the duck to sail
    must disappoint to keep the stern
    big sigh the beach
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  • (11/23/2015 11:35:00 AM)


    Heartfelt poetry, In life such mishaps happens take it as they come, man. Very effective writing. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/23/2015 11:22:00 AM)


    Loss of love is one of the most painful things a person ever has to deal with. Nicely written, Mohammed. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • (11/23/2015 11:07:00 AM)


    Fantastic poem Asim, God bless you. (Report) Reply

  • Rahman Henry (11/23/2015 10:38:00 AM)


    Awesome love poem, wonderfully illustrated.....10++++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Jaishree Nair (11/23/2015 9:09:00 AM)


    A nice drop .thanks (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 23, 2015



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