Anger So Sweetly (Revised) Poem by Linda Ori
Anger So Sweetly (Revised)
Why do I let you get to me?
I don't understand what you say -
One minute you're glad
The next one you're mad
I feel like I'm treading thin ice;
You constantly throw me off balance,
I hold my affection in check -
And then in a minute
You smile, and you win it
I feel like I'm losing my mind;
Why do you make me so angry?
Why do I feel so uptight?
I so want to please you
Instead I just tease you
And then we end up in a fight;
So why don't we just change the game plan,
Agree to be lovers instead -
And when there's an issue
We'll just grab the tissue
And make anger so sweetly in bed!
For my special friend - 'THANK YOU'
Linda, it's such a joy to read a good poem written with maturity by someone with maturity. 'Online' is being swamped by young girls who can' t or won't get their hands out of their panties, and write accordingly. Yish!
Turmoil and turbulence on the seas of emotion. I like it a bit steadier than this, but the solution is perfect for smoothing troubled waters. More very tightly focussed and poetic writing Linda. x
Laughing... but important truths memorably penned. t x
Your poem flows beautifully. It sounds like a great plan. : -))
What a splendid idea, a much better way of spending ones time indeed. Clever indeed. A big (10) from me---Melvina--
You adequately expressed exasperation but in the end proposed a harmonious collaboration.
Linda, I agree with.P d. about the last line, that so neatly tied up this beautiful poem. Marvellous. Lovely written as usual.10/10 from me. Loved it. Thanks for sharing it. David
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/13/2025 3:26:28 AM # 1.0.0
and make anger sweetly in bed....loved the end! amazing stuff!