Anniversary Day Of Submitting (3rd) Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Anniversary Day Of Submitting (3rd)

Rating: 5.0


Time

I'm

Walking,

Passed away

The last year from me

Some sorrow-happiness grabs us

Silent expressions never stop its march on towards

Subtraction of anything or anyone creates a memory or history!

I'm with continual time, a piece of life story, where joy and sadness are entangled pervasively, now floating on an epitaph


-January,2021 Chattogram

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
15th January,2018 was the day of my first appearance on this literary web site and by this writing I'm celebrating my 3rd anniversary day of submitting *****FIBONACCI style; syllabic form- 1+1+2+3+5+8+13+21+34…….*****
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 27 January 2021

Let the past go by. May the new year bring you good luck and joy. Top stars

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 27 January 2021

Glad to have found you after a long search, dear Mahtab. Heartiest Congratulations on your 3rd Anniversary in PH.

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Varsha M 26 January 2021

Beautiful write. A beautiful collection of poetic journey so well preserved. Its nice to enjoy your stay lovely composition. Congratulations for a wonderful journey.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 January 2021

Excellent piece of Memory makes Brilliant poetry, dear Poet. From deepest within I say CONGRATULATIONS for your THIRD Anniversary Day of being on PH. God's Blessings

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