Anniversary Day Of Submitting (2nd) Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Anniversary Day Of Submitting (2nd)

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calm
day
alone
in wise ink
wrote you in my heart
worshiped you step by step o love
to thou crowned stair I made the globe of sunny knowledge
in enlightened path of love none detained my adornment where I'm earthly defeated
"I'm truth that's why I'm silent in your false" was my contemplation on the silent beliefs, deeds, speeches and writes to guide the self to the truth


-January 15,2020 Chattogram

Wednesday, January 15, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: silence,true love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
15th January,2018 was the day of my first appearance on this literary web site and by this writing I'm celebrating my 2nd anniversary day of submitting


*****FIBONACCI style; syllabic form- 1+1+2+3+5+8+13+21+34*****
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohabeer Beeharry 05 July 2020

There is a lot of truth here. Truth is quiet and deep. We make a lot of noise...fake demonstration, signifying nothing. Mohabeer Beeharry

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 January 2020

Positiveness! ! In wise ink. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 January 2020

calm day alone in wise ink wrote you in my heart worshiped you step by step o love....superbly expressed! An excellent poem.............................10

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 January 2020

Abstract, imaginative, intellectual... As to Fibonacci, beyond 5 to 7 lines perhaps it would be unwieldy. Great

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