As I Breathe The Sweet Air Poem by ANDREW BLAKEMORE

As I Breathe The Sweet Air

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As I breathe the sweet air all around me,
And I gaze at the beautiful sky,
Far over the valleys and mountains,
An eagle is soaring so high.

As I see all the sights of the country,
And drink from the rivers and streams,
I feel such a strong sense of freedom,
For this is the place of my dreams.

As I hear all the wonderful bird songs,
That float through the woodland I roam,
I gaze at the trees all around me,
And know that this place is my own.

As I smell all the scents of the flowers,
Their colours so vivid and strong,
And knowing wherever I wander,
My heart here shall always belong.


The cadence of your work, is smooth, and lyrically enhanced...well positioned imagery, along with the fluxing structure, makes for an enjoyable read....Solid Work, once again, Andrew. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Ernestine Northover 09 April 2008

Your writes hold wonderful pictures painted so beautifully with your words. I so enjoy reading them, I do so love poems that make sense, tell some lovely stories and have delicious contents. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 15 April 2008

Like a tale from old, this has such a sence of elegance and quality about it, , but then! So does so much of what you write, , in fact, , all that I have read by you so far! ! Thankyou for sharing your amazing talents with us your readers Love duncan X

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George Sicillia 15 April 2008

As I read your songs of beauty And I breathe the sweet air all around me I could see the dancing angels On a choir to God Almighty Hi Andrew.. keep up the good work!

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C.R. Clark 13 April 2008

I do love poems about nature and this one is excellent, excellent, excellent. You paint such a beautiful picture, Andrew. Thanks....10... Richard

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Abha Sharma 11 April 2008

a beautiful nature poem attaching humble sentiments...and spreading a serene aura around...

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Thad Wilk 09 April 2008

With your poetry you have painted another perfect picture of nature in its glory! *10*! ! Thanks for sharing Andrew! ! ! Best regards , Friend Thad

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