I feel the thrill of a naughty kid
when the spray of lashing waves
falls in sprinkles all over
soaking me from head to foot
I swim in waves of delight
when the arms of the moon
through the vagrant clouds
are extended to pamper n' caress me
I enjoy a sensuous thrill
when the stars from behind
their cerulean veil, wink at me
beckoning me to join their night revelry
I enjoy perfect stillness and calm
when sleep closes my eyelids
and into a deep slumber I enter
afloat on a dreamy bubble
I know these sensations are brief
and are whisked away too soon
by the ever churning currents
and time's unerring movement
But I savour an abiding bliss
when God's hands enclose me
in a loving embrace and am
illumined by the Divine Light
without pills and meditation such pleasure and calmness in nature, beautiful life and poem.
Lashing emotion of waves sprinkle breeze of attention like for kids and we feel the thrill. Swimming in waves of delight mesmerizes mind entirely. Enjoying the senses thrill and stars remain behind. God's hand encloses us with light. LOVING EMBRACE is seen in DIVINE LIGHT. Very beautiful poem is shared with caring nature. This is excellently penned.10
Illuminated by Divine Light Blessed are those who can say that with delight. You churned out words of nectar with the force of the lashing waves. Thank you.
Once in awhile comes a poem like this which will lull you to a dreamland where you wish you can stay forever. Thanks Valsa
You've recreated the sensations of these experiences in a way that helps us to live them with you. Thank you, Valsa.
hi, valsa! your descriptions make it easy to imagine the sense experiences—good nouns, adjectives, and verbs—so many they'd make a long list. hoping this finds you well, glen
maybe someday you WILL join the stars! you already are a star on PH! ! favorite lines: when the arms of the moon through the vagrant clouds are extended to pamper n' caress me..............'what i wouldn't give to'*** be the arms of the....... ................................................................................ moon over Ernakulam! ! ! and afloat on a dreamy bubble Valsa, are you SURE you sleep at night? or do you stay up all night thinking up fanciful lines for your poems? the whole last stanza is pretty (damn) good also, but i want to put I in front of am. i enjoy so much more a fine poem like this one, sans rhyming, than a poem full of perfect rhymes but which is also 'full' of typos or which i can't understand, or has misspellings, poor grammar, etc. to MyPoemList. bri :) :) - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - from Google: *** Would Someone Explain The Phrase What I Wouldn't Give Mean... education.blurtit.com/.../would-someone-explain-the-phrase-what-i-wouldnt-give-me... Answer (1 of 1) : It means that you really want something and would give almost anything to get it. - - - - - - - - - - - - - ok, maybe i, bri, wouldn't give almost anything, especially not my freezer full of ice cream.
Wow.... you have made my day Bri! So.... one more poem of mine has gone into your favorite list! You alone have the patience to comment on a poem at length! Thank you so much!
All nature has to offer us in moments of joy as time churns, the beauty of the simplicity of living is beautifully crafted with the beauty of God's holy presence bathing you in his divine light!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Those blissful moments are what life is truly about. To feel so alive with the thrill and to know the comfort of sleep in the hands of spirit.