Ashes Of Old Lovers Poem by Susan Lacovara

Love the passion! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

I think if I was to compile a poetry book this would be one of the first entries. Great work in the first reading and I may return for a second helping soon.

Tip of a burning cigar is more dangerous than burning coal And hold the dense white smoke Which is injurious to health Memories of old lovers Rouse up from the ashes of their lost moments to be dumped and discarded

Uniquely deep and executed in an excellent way to describe a sad ending to love.

Left behind... Like me... Like what we had... Like what it was When it was us.. unforgiving smoke.. i find that you have a very original way of expressing your struggles. i like your originality. from simple symbols you arise to say about unforgiving smoke, thank you tony

Exactly, the ashes of old lovers should be treated the way poetess has opined... wonderful poem.

Left behind... Like me... Like what we had... Like what it was When it was us... unforgiving smoke........ your wounds, and ur decison to let go...... wonderful. tony

Like the ashes of old loves, your poem will remain to haunt your readers, even when we exhale a deep sigh of sadness.10+

One of the wonders of poetry is that the brilliant ones, the immensely well created and deeply felt ones, Never grow old! This one, that you so emotionally and poignantly wrote, won't get old either. Great poem!

This is just brilliant! ! I love the wonderful imagery and how the words just draw one in and live the experience..thank you so much for sharing +10 Lodigiana x