Asmaradana (Love Song) Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

interesting the way you combined

i love your style. you have perfected it

a very thoughful piece....i could'nt make anything out of the other script...

If the world lived on love, the need for jewels and fancy things would be small, as we would be too busy looking after each other. Right thoughts good writing.

A poem of two languages...unique style of writing....Thanks for sharing this lovely poem....

Hey, there's a song in Malaysia with the exact title and some of the Java lines! Maybe they adopted it from the Java language. Beautiful! Full of love and quality.. you are a versatile and experienced poet. Bop to the top, bro!

A lovely poem........

even angels sing this love song....it tells and talk about what is life...in the purest soul in our heart...not just only a gift to live in this world....but life of life itself...a precious one a gems in heaven...such an immortal song made in a poem...your great my friend..God bless and thank you for the poem shared

It such a joy to read your native tong, makes me consider to start writing in frisian as wel, even when that takes something more since i only speak it. gie sa troch sizze wy dan. wel worth reading my friend. and like the iris say a thousandfold thanks. The Boomfriend

The greatest things in life are free yet money is important and necessary. Keep writing.