Atlantis Poem by Kostas Lagos

Atlantis

Rating: 4.8


A swordsman in black

he rides from the Atlantis

on his pale seahorse

The waves cannot stop him

as he charges on the ships

of the people of the dry land

holding the banner of the oceans

A new day will dawn

the day of revenge, the day of retribution

thousands of years under the surface of the sea

are over at last

from the churning waters

Atlantis will rise once again!

Saturday, February 5, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 February 2022

An imaginative write well crafted tinged with mystery and adorned with compelling images. Excellent! !

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Jayne Davies 06 February 2022

Great descriptive write!

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Ruta Mohapatra 06 February 2022

Liked the fantasy! Atlantis is such a mystery...

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Richard Wlodarski 14 April 2022

Par excellence! Donovan will love this poem. I was hearing his song in my mind as I read your poem.

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Anjandev Roy 08 February 2022

Excellent and impeccable.......thank u, dear poet....

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 07 February 2022

Atlantis -rising from the churning waters. brilliant imagery Kostas....10

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 06 February 2022

The brave heart of truth never dies!

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David Wood 06 February 2022

an imaginative write on Atlantis. As a former scuba diver I have seen couple of sea horses on a shallow dive.

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