Attracted Poem by Deborah Cromer

Attracted

Rating: 4.3


Like a butterfly to a flower your movement attracts my eyes
To join you, securing bond and relations for us, silently affection cries
You give me life, I need you, I hunger for your taste
Every moment with you my time is no waste
The growling inside loudens, my hunger needs to eat
I feast off your body, so manly, sensitive and sweet
I taste your closeness, licking, sucking and swallowing flavor of skin
The game of life, two players, a chance for us both to win
Touch my shoulder and kiss my neck, the moment is yours to please
Nuzzle your nose to my ear, breathing sounds that playfully tease
You laugh a little, deep and slow, you know you have the stand
My body is yours to act and give on your honorable command
You touch my body and it caresses my soul's cover
Penetrating through into the center of my being, you become my lover
Energy expelled with heavy breathing, only to ventilate the fires
Burning hot, fueled immensely, combustion of passion floods all wires
A pulsation of throbbing waves, wet breakers of highest, cresting want
Your skin and scent excite me, as your tongue moves to taunt
In this moment, I have to feel you now, love me hard and deep
Licking you slowly, feeling you move, a memory to always keep
Hurled above rhythm, hearts pound in pattern with thunderous roar
Thoughts now of the next time we are together are hard to ignore

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny H 17 August 2009

Very passionate :) And may i add Hot: D haha. Keep Writing!

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Keith Young 05 August 2009

this is a very steamy and passionate piece and i hope that the guy that made you feel that why knows how much he ment to you

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Andrew Blakemore 04 August 2009

A steamy and passionate piece Deborah with very vivid imagery. Best wishes, Andrew

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The Dreamer 25 July 2009

Wow - many nice words but this i like Like a butterfly to a flower your movement attracts my eyes - good found words nice 10+

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Siddharth Singh 24 July 2009

ooh! it's really hot in there.

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Fay Slimm 23 September 2009

Sensuously passionate Deborah - - I like the comparison at the start of the attraction the butterfly has for the flower...... a dreamy steamy verse....10 plus from Fay

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Catrina Heart 16 September 2009

Elegance have your passionate lines here..well written poem..............10+++++

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Sarwar Chowdhury 06 September 2009

oh what a lovely........passionate........compact.......and fine wording! 10+

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Steven S 25 August 2009

The world needs more poems like this... full of passion and enthusiasm.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 August 2009

Hurled above rhythm, hearts pound in pattern with thunderous roar Thoughts now of the next time we are together are hard to ignore it is for asking and can be had anytime but it will be very hard to ignore...10 read mine butterflies...anywhere and mary to marry

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