New clearance sale! ! !
Satan brokered the deal
A salvo from nuclear arsenal
Knocked down bid final
Mr. Hades clinched all
Body wrappers are buried
Spirits are…… under dispatch
Compact yet to the point. Hit the cherry with a poisonous dart...Great imagery used. a 10+++
Mabye one day I will be able to pen such a great piece as this......Robert
Rage penned with irony and brevity. You are a cartoonist with words, Sathya. You bite the reader where it hurts. Great work. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
at your satirical best, full of angst and bathos. powerful and disturbing imagery.10 Mamta
A unique theme and presentation..Auctioned, clearance sale written so fine with great rhymes...10+++
a very imaginative piece there....opposing the use of nuclear weapons..thankgod at least the spirit is bought over by god
You have lightened the tone of such a dark and foreboding topic. You have great imagination.
Wow... Bhayya, what an imagery... You have a great vision... Dark yet wonderful...10 ++++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A dramatic piece and so final - for now.