Auction Poem by Sathya Narayana

Auction

Rating: 5.0


New clearance sale! ! !
Satan brokered the deal
A salvo from nuclear arsenal
Knocked down bid final
Mr. Hades clinched all
Body wrappers are buried
Spirits are…… under dispatch

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 03 January 2009

A dramatic piece and so final - for now.

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C T Heart 03 January 2009

Compact yet to the point. Hit the cherry with a poisonous dart...Great imagery used. a 10+++

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Robert Jaffray 03 January 2009

Mabye one day I will be able to pen such a great piece as this......Robert

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Alison Cassidy 31 December 2008

Rage penned with irony and brevity. You are a cartoonist with words, Sathya. You bite the reader where it hurts. Great work. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Mamta Agarwal 31 December 2008

at your satirical best, full of angst and bathos. powerful and disturbing imagery.10 Mamta

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Vaibhav Pandey 13 February 2009

sir, very sarcastic indeed......a great write...

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Catrina Heart 12 February 2009

A unique theme and presentation..Auctioned, clearance sale written so fine with great rhymes...10+++

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 08 February 2009

a very imaginative piece there....opposing the use of nuclear weapons..thankgod at least the spirit is bought over by god

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Eddie Roa 13 January 2009

You have lightened the tone of such a dark and foreboding topic. You have great imagination.

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Dr Kamran Haider 11 January 2009

Wow... Bhayya, what an imagery... You have a great vision... Dark yet wonderful...10 ++++++++

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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