Beast Around Poem by Luwi Habte

Beast Around

Rating: 5.0


Dedicated to one smart lady

She is worst for the bad
She is best for the good
She is caring for who cares
She is careless for dolls
She is kind for hearten
She is easy for broken
She is hard for losers
She is brilliant for previous lessons

Don’t be a guest
She is telling she is a beast
Most kind and cruel worst

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 14 November 2009

owwww....superlative are well presented dear.... and i think, the figure of speeches are complete...hyperbole, simile, irony, personification, metaphor, onomatopoeia and etc...etc....

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Carol Gall 14 November 2009

nicely said maybe not so precios? 10

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Kesav Easwaran 14 November 2009

she must be a precious beast! good...a poem of my kind...10

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 14 November 2009

A fine expression about a flower which is also a knife. Strange but interesting combination. Liked the sincerity in the poem.

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John Knight 14 November 2009

Hi Luwi - A lovely poem with a warning to all men - TEN. We have all met precioous ladies! As you say the can be worst - bad - careless - easy & hard. The can also be best - good - caring - kind & brilliant. They are like chameleons and have many moods. The only way to pleasure such ladies is to read their moods! You are not like that LUWI you are always lovely - pleasureable and gentle - we all love you. Love ib Poetry - JOHN

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John Mcmanus 25 November 2009

I like this one Luwi it's very effective and gets over it's message really well.

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Henry Brown 23 November 2009

Oh what would we men do without you woman. Very descriptive of the typical woman

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Dipy Hermonite 16 November 2009

Thoughts very well articulated. Once again you have shouwn great talent. Keep shining. lol. Dipy

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Alf Hutchison 14 November 2009

Luwi how well you capture the changing faces of woman ... Regards Alf

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Eyan Desir 14 November 2009

Well expressed..........................

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