Because Of You Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Because Of You

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An extremist is always avoidable
Yes; nowadays I am addicted to you!
O Love

In me the thoughts of you are poisonous
I know my addictions are excess
Excess anything of necessary is poison

But I do not know what's heaven
I do not know where's my goal or who's God
Love for you is everything in me

When I imagine heaven
Then it seems to me- the heaven is beautiful,
Eternal peaceful because of you O Love
If you are not with me heaven will be hell

In the seraglio of heaven
I am the sepulcher of any hate

Let me come to the caravansary of heaven
Let my serenade be the seraph for you
Let me be more addicted to you
Let my heaven be more seraphic
Because of you let me be poisonous, extremist of love


-14.11.2020 Chattogram

Saturday, November 14, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 14 November 2020

Wonderful second stanza dear Mahtab! A brilliant write. Full score!

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Deluke Muwanigwa 14 November 2020

Yah too much of anything is poison. Romeo and Juliet took their lives poisoned by too much love. Find a side chick as a diversion. I joke. Thats even deadlier more than. Great poem

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 November 2020

again the same poem i'd commented on MY LOVE UR poem

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poet me poet 15 November 2020

love only lasts till does burst as poets all know u r no exception mbbbbbbbb

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 November 2020

Addiction! ! ! ! Muse of love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Khairul Ahsan 15 November 2020

'O Love If you are not with me heaven will be ' - a beautiful dedication to love.

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Varsha M 15 November 2020

Your poetic expression is stupendous. But excess not goo. Balance always overrule. Second chance may never come. Be wise and win it full. Good poetry.

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