Beneath The Rising Sun Poem by Aqua Flower

Beneath The Rising Sun

Rating: 4.5


Beneath the rising sun
a beautiful blossom will become
now dormant in a garden of weeds
surrounded by a flowerbed of need
hungry is she for fertile soil
patiently waiting for her time to unfurl
beneath the rising sun
a beautiful blossom will become

Copyright @ Aqua Flower
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Beneath The Rising Sun
Monday, January 21, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: change,hope,inspirational
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 12 February 2019

Hungry is she! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Carl Roussell 21 January 2019

..and may the sun shine brightly on you...excellent poem - this should be poem of the day! !

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Khairul Ahsan 21 January 2019

'patiently waiting for her time to unfurl' - hope the time comes soon enough!

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Aqua Flower 21 January 2019

I am the waiting princess! When we wait for love, it always seems like eternity! :)

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Kostas Lagos 21 January 2019

Although somebody may seems defeated, a counter attack is on the way. Beautiful poem

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Aqua Flower 21 January 2019

Counter attack! I like the way you think........ :) Thanks for the comment!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 January 2019

I find a great depth in this short sweet poem! Extremely well penned! Loved reading it...10

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Aqua Flower 21 January 2019

Thank you Dillip for finding the depth of this poem. You've picked up on the emotion! :)

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