Best Friends Poem by shiny shine
Best Friends
We were considered by others Best Friends
“unbreakable” is what our friendship was said to be
I knew it was to good to be true
I expected it might end but not so abruptly
I trusted you with everything
We had our fun
We played our games
It was unbelievable
A dream come true
It all started last school year
But one of my friends let a secret slip
The Truth
I was not aware until you told me
When I found out I was sure it was over
We stuck together though
Still had our fun
Played our games
The future lay neatly
So clearly
Then this year came
I could tell it was going to be a bad year
As soon as we made eye contact
On that rememerable first week of school
Yet again we pulled through, became friends yet again
Then abruptly about two months ago
Something happened I will never forget
We stopped talking permanently
Why? I am unsure
Probably never will know
Every time you walk by
I wonder to myself “why“
I had hoped our friendship would last
Now my hopes are black as glass
Worthless
I know we will never be the same
Every time I think of you and I
I want to cry
It was so enjoyable
Now it is doubtful
But one thing I know for sure is
I will never forget the good old days
When it was peacefully you and me
I should have known it was to true to
Last forever but I had hope
When you walk by
I want to cry
But I know it will not bother you
Because of that one day and one secret
It makes me angry but even more disappointed
yup...friends can be like that so people have to be carefull what they say to certain people...did u like him? if u did then I felt ur pain... I'm sorry...
'Love is not finding the perfect someone and living happily for the rest of all eternity, but the ability to look past all the imperfections and see a diamond in the rough', ~Poetic Kadri The poem expresses things that mere words cannot explain. Each word in your poem brings foreshadowing to the next and light to the one before. 10+
I agree with jameshia it was very good, it shows how friends come and go but the memories are here to stay
Your poem speaks volume of friendships...most friendships are short lived, a few are everlasting, nevertheless, we learn -or should learn lessons from those we meet on life's journey. Thanks for inviting me to read your work
Best friends are always special friends and special part of life. We had our fun We played our games It was unbelievable A dream come true A tenner for the attitude depicted here.
The structure here is better. But silly grammatical and spelling mistakes. In the first 'stanza' you write 'I expected it would last but not so abruptly.'? ? ? Perhaps you meant 'I expected it might end but not so abruptly.' One must work harder to make a good poem than to do anything else in life. Yet it must look easy.
Hello Shiny...trust broken in friendship is so difficult to repair but if the friendship is worth saving save it... don't wait... enjoyed your poem very much I wrote a poem on friendship about 40 years ago have a look nothing changes... regards Alf
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Awww such a sad but good poem. Super job on it!