Between You And Me Poem by Indira Renganathan

Between You And Me

Rating: 5.0


I am too short
You are too tall
Your friends laughed at
The matchless match
There upon you've started wavering

Parents resolve to solve
Give us a weighing balance
We put our hearts on each side
Ha...you're relieved.... also I'm

It's just between you and me
Like zephyr and flower

Friday, October 29, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: flower,parents
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 October 2021

A beautiful love story so succinctly and wonderfully crafted. Cleverly written. Liked the ultimate stanza.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 October 2021

A beautiful love story so succinctly and wonderfully crafted. Cleverly written. Top Marks! !

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Chinedu Dike 30 October 2021

A beautiful creation elegantly put together. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched, Madam.

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M Asim Nehal 29 October 2021

Fantastic, In the end made for each other. Fabulous short love story.

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Bharati Nayak 01 November 2021

So beautiful and sweet poem---When love joins hearts all differences vanish!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 October 2021

Amazing! The last line made me smile!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 31 October 2021

As always, so brilliantly penned dear Indira Ma'm. A pleasure to read.......5 stars

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 31 October 2021

A wonderful poem of matchless match. Always opposites and contrasts match well

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 31 October 2021

My parents were like that and they were married for 59 years Bravo!

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