Scintillating birds of glittering sunshine,
Spectacular plumage like glistening gemstones,
Smaller, tinier than little sparrows,
Sailing from flower to flower,
Sunbirds! So beautiful and bright!
Quintain - 5 lines of 5 words each
Five lines creating a magical web to capture the reader in its thrall. Such is the beauty of the bird as well as the poetic expression. Cute composition. Thanks, Geeta ji.
A splendid work....very much inspiring...the format of the poem also is a right choice...I have not seen this bird anywhere around so far...very beautiful....kudos
A lovely poem that captures the wonderful attributes of sunbirds embellished with great images. A captivating sight.
dear Geeta, If you are able to communicate with Bharati N., Valsa G., Ahktar J., Kim B., and a host of others, please tell them I 'miss' them. Thanks. bri : )
T.T., and others, I have library books to pass the hours now, without PH. PH has stood in the way of many things i used to do here, including signing in to the site in many cases. : (: ( bri
T.T., i 'love' birds. I hope you are well, as I hope all my P friends are, even though, last i checked, maybe 2 weeks ago, the 'new' PH seems to have an aversion to me, and it sort of sickens me that it changed. : ( bri
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
T. T., poem is nice, but photo (i'll bet) is not of a sunbird, but, rather, a male American Goldfinch. I did look at plenty of photos of 'sunbirds' online a few minutes ago. : ) bri