Scintillating birds of glittering sunshine,
Spectacular plumage like glistening gemstones,
Smaller, tinier than little sparrows,
Sailing from flower to flower,
Sunbirds! So beautiful and bright!
Quintain - 5 lines of 5 words each
Five lines creating a magical web to capture the reader in its thrall. Such is the beauty of the bird as well as the poetic expression. Cute composition. Thanks, Geeta ji.
T. T., poem is nice, but photo (i'll bet) is not of a sunbird, but, rather, a male American Goldfinch. I did look at plenty of photos of 'sunbirds' online a few minutes ago. : ) bri
A splendid work....very much inspiring...the format of the poem also is a right choice...I have not seen this bird anywhere around so far...very beautiful....kudos
A lovely poem that captures the wonderful attributes of sunbirds embellished with great images. A captivating sight.
dear Geeta, If you are able to communicate with Bharati N., Valsa G., Ahktar J., Kim B., and a host of others, please tell them I 'miss' them. Thanks. bri : )
T.T., and others, I have library books to pass the hours now, without PH. PH has stood in the way of many things i used to do here, including signing in to the site in many cases. : (: ( bri
T.T., i 'love' birds. I hope you are well, as I hope all my P friends are, even though, last i checked, maybe 2 weeks ago, the 'new' PH seems to have an aversion to me, and it sort of sickens me that it changed. : ( bri
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice representation....