Birds,
How can I be your mind
Dispatching mine sudden behind
Seems, heave no burdening thoughts
And no woes you to pinion in lots
Circling in the encircling space
Fluttering dancing in immense grace
Squeak and screech in immeasurable joy
Surging surfingnever to cloy
Happy up there high and high
To the breadth of titanic sky
Soar, soar o'weightless hearts
Weightless I say, on your worriless hearts
Weightless I say unlike mine weighty
Of sobs and sighs wingless and unhappy
On your treads of swift darts
Frail my heart heavy in vain parts
Birds,
How can I be your mind
Dispatching mine sudden behind
WANTING TO FLY...A VERY NATURAL YEARNING OF MAN...DEFINITELY THEY HAVE A LIGHTER HEART....VERY WELL WRITTEN MAM
huge flight of words.... everyone wishes to b a bird... nice poem.
'Soar, soar o'weightless hearts Weightless I say, on your worriless hearts' O to be a bird and soar high to new places without any baggage or any cares...Lovely piece Indira
Circling in the encircling space Fluttering dancing in immense grace Squeak and screech in immeasurable joy Surging surfingnever to cloy.....After reading your poem carefully i wished if i were a bird.. thank you. tony
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I am just flabbergasted... I remember, i wrote in my biography 'I do want to share my writings here To know how much similar / different We writers feel.' This is the perfect thing to get inspired. Weightless Bird, my goodness I had just posted 2 days ago... And here is this.. sitting pretty over the days. Birds are amazing...but i do feel sad for them When they get soaked in the rain Sit on the branch and blink at us. Rest all other feature.. they are just amazing You observation is too fine gripped.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful write...so pleasing to read...rich with nice rhyme and rhythm...in Emily Dickinson style...thanks...10