Birthing Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Birthing

Rating: 5.0


The day births in tender tones of golden,
soaking up the tears of darkness
Don't just open your eyes, but rise like a bird in flight,
measuring the limitless space
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There's still a lot to know,
a lot to explore
Life didn't end when your heart broke.

Saturday, February 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dawn ,hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarzoo Mehek 06 April 2018

Never let the hope die and never let the faith dim. There is lots to conquer.beautiful poem.

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Liza Sudina 15 March 2018

Light hidden after dark, joy hidden in sorrow. Optimistic and bright!

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Daniel Brick 13 March 2018

This is a brave poem. Then last line proves this. It is the most objective statement of the most subjective experience. It show you gave already taken a long journey of self discovery; what you have learned is expressed in the first four lines in the clearest imagery if effort and hope. That soaring bird is your victory over disappointment, and you share that victory with us.

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Muhammad Ali 10 March 2018

Nosheen Hi, So a broken heart is like night darkness before it is dawn of awareness, very beautiful thought and poem. this is really true.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 February 2018

It is a gorgeous poem on dawn with hope having groovy collocation. I quote... There's still a lot to know, a lot to explore Life didn't end when your heart broke. Thanks for sharing.

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 June 2018

Hi Nosheen, Marvellous poem. Don't just open your eyes Rise like a bird in flight... Yes, soar on your wings, that would take you to new heights., new skies. For, There's there's still a lot to know lot to explore.... And of course, The world didn't end when your heart broke. The positive energy you, your poem exude! Wonderful. Loved reading this. A 10 and onto my poem list. Thank you.

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Your optimism is infectious. Short, beautiful poem of hope. (10)

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Susan Williams 07 May 2018

Thank you for writing this and thank God I read it today. Don't just open your eyes, but rise like a bird in flight, / measuring the limitless space / There's still a lot to know, / a lot to explore I will try to believe that, my dear friend, since it comes straight from your gentle heart. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++ and on my fav list

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Hans Vr 26 April 2018

Wonderful and very inspiring poem. So true and so touching.

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Akhtar Jawad 19 April 2018

There's still a lot to know, a lot to explore Life didn't end when your heart broke. It's a broken heart that is capable of performing the miracles, thoughtful and beautiful.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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