# Bliss [haiku] Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

a natural poem with a supernatural meaning....a poem that leads every immoratl soul to a wisdom.... that all are bliss in harmony to the existence of the universe...thank you my friend and God bless...a 10+++++

Simplicity is natural so is your ku... god touches thru Pavarotti and sunshine babies and beauty....++10 regards

Dear Samanyan, Thanks for inviting my comments on your poem Bliss-Haiku. In the recent past I posted a few Haiku in PH and correctly I was advised by either Mrs Catrina Heart or Mrs Marie Shine that they were not in perfect format, .Haiku is in a format of 5-7-5 ending with natural flora or fauna or God e, .g. 'the tree will be cut not kn-ow-ing the bi-rd ma-kes a ne-st' OR 'a le-af fa-lls lo! an -other le-af fa-lls wi-th the wi-nd' Some of the Indian and Pakistani poets have also made nice Haikus incl. Tagore. I'm trying to learn. By the time you know, that yours is also falling under mis -formatting. But you have successfully send the message. Hence I'LL RATE IT AT 9-RAJKUMAR

Quite deep this one, I read it over and over 10 Lynda xx

hmm.. i like haiku's becoause they mean n say so much with so few words... :)

Bliss, the God pimple just is

a natural haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

May be to conclude... All bliss are natural. Unnatural wouldn't sustain for long. Good one. Enjoyed the read. Thank you.

this bliss is something I would not like to miss good write -10 anjali

bliss........ fantastic presentation..........