Bonds Poem by Eyan Desir

Bonds

Rating: 4.5


Soft words soften the ice,
Pleasurable moments,
Plays on souls like harps
Stories, told bridge all gaps
From the furthest mountains,
To the closest of leaves,
Hours spent is the link,
Tightening the golden chain
Of two leaves on a branch
Our minds flow with intimacy
Affections glues two hearts

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rafique Farooqi 04 December 2009

Soft words soften the ice, Pleasurable moments, Plays on souls like harps Stories, told bridge all gaps From the furthest mountains, To the closest of leaves yes soft words are soothing.....i like your poem

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Anthony Verran 04 December 2009

Great work of material. Elegant use of works and outstanding vocabulary. Well done.

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Ramesh T A 29 November 2009

Indeed with two leaves everything evolved in the world of man! Nice poem!

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Lady Grace 29 November 2009

poetic words are nice to read...from that words appear the truths of intelligence...so nice to read..it unlocks the views of both unwanted reasons... smiles embrace the pain of truthfulness it hurts the unbalance hormones of communication it breaks the unsuccessful growth of trust in the premature bonding of man and woman...

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Tsira Goge 30 November 2009

Tightening the golden chain Of two leaves on a branch Our minds flow with intimacy Affections glues two hearts ........................................... Eyan, -Fine sensitive picture... Melodious also...10x10.. Thank you for nice words... Tsira

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 June 2010

Watch N’ Mind your Words…isn’t it? …if I’m right? Ms. Nivedita UK

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Mark Nwagwu 11 December 2009

hours spent together, lapsing into eternity, earth reborn for our tomorrows, that we spend more hours in love oh, this is beautiful, Eyan; i liked it a lot

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Mayra Cerda 07 December 2009

nice thoughts i like the way it was written with you're thoughts

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Kristina B; Williams 05 December 2009

a exquisite piece of work......

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Kesav Easwaran 05 December 2009

theme sad and poignat...verses but sweet...a poem written in haste...yet carries the message to whom it's concerned...thanks...10

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