Bonds Poem by Eyan Desir

Bonds

Rating: 4.5


Soft words soften the ice,
Pleasurable moments,
Plays on souls like harps
Stories, told bridge all gaps
From the furthest mountains,
To the closest of leaves,
Hours spent is the link,
Tightening the golden chain
Of two leaves on a branch
Our minds flow with intimacy
Affections glues two hearts

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rafique Farooqi 04 December 2009

Soft words soften the ice, Pleasurable moments, Plays on souls like harps Stories, told bridge all gaps From the furthest mountains, To the closest of leaves yes soft words are soothing.....i like your poem

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Ken E Hall 04 December 2009

Affection two hearts intimate moments you have spelt out love that can melt hearts luvli poem Eyan ++++10 regads

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 04 December 2009

'Hours spent is the link, Tightening the golden chain Of two leaves on a branch' i like these lines much, the whole poem is short and sweet to read....

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Danielle Guscott 04 December 2009

'Pleasurable moments, Plays on souls like harps' Simply sweetness and beauty. I love this poem!

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Sherri Coulter 03 December 2009

hours spent is the link........10

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 June 2010

Watch N’ Mind your Words…isn’t it? …if I’m right? Ms. Nivedita UK

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Mark Nwagwu 11 December 2009

hours spent together, lapsing into eternity, earth reborn for our tomorrows, that we spend more hours in love oh, this is beautiful, Eyan; i liked it a lot

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Mayra Cerda 07 December 2009

nice thoughts i like the way it was written with you're thoughts

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Kristina B; Williams 05 December 2009

a exquisite piece of work......

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Kesav Easwaran 05 December 2009

theme sad and poignat...verses but sweet...a poem written in haste...yet carries the message to whom it's concerned...thanks...10

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