For evil live in her core
Hiding waiting to pop out
She will lift her pretty face
To conceal the dangers within
She will taunt you tease
With juice of love and lust
But only forbidden souls she seeks
To taste her fruit
Means playing with flames of hell
She will please you to make you a slave
Her beauty passes fresh roses
Sweetness sweeter than honey
Value precious like gold
Pleasure unparallel
For beauty this sweet
Can only be a sin
Leading souls into the fires of hell!
11 th Sep 2008
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A very creative theme.. Nice flow of words.. You said it, what you had.. Way to go..
wow! a sweet surrender tail with pain.....making the best to be true and lead a power to convey the dunes of strength into the horizon of faith.....that makes every person strong....facing the trail of life...there is the hope and the wisdom to face of what the world gives.... at least you share your pain and the courage to let pain and victory surrender to what your faith believes.....and let the face of your wonder seduce the temptation pause... a very powerful poem...that gives the reader to go beyond of what is the past...thank you for sharing your thought....God bless....a 10 +++++
nice write on a creative theme. you have a very vivid and imaginative way of writing. the trick of the seductress or the sucubus is to lure you in first with the sweetest of smiles and then trap you with the temptations of the even better things to come that conceals their true purpose. very well written, my friend.10+ Jen
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
well written one more deadly sin 10