Anger a Boomerang destructive..
To self own itself an enemy afflicted
Never can anger bond with the opponent
Instead can acquire grudgeful resentment
What else than being angry, angered then..
A thought of 'why' could be
Erratic, errorful itself on self own
Than on others erratic, errorful
O'dear friend
Attest, can any one be errorless..no
Pray thereso by self's conscience
For no anger, no sin
O'dear friend
Attest, can anyone be errorless...yes
So if there, pervades then love wholesome
A Boomerang constructive sans anger
O'dear friend, you decide on a Boomerang
Constructive or destructive..
O'dear friend, you decide on a Boomerang Constructive or destructive.. ------ nice thoughtful advice..............10+++
hi indira just picked you up random...an great great potery... im doing your first poem an am impressed great idea nice flow...msg as powerful as the thud of a boomerang hitting home cheers
good advice all through...inspirational wrtie, Indira...well said, anger is an enemy to self indeed...10
constructive yes your poem is wonderful ill heed your advice a tenner from meeeeeeeee anjuuuuuuu
Additionally, I totally agree with the thought contents of this excellent top. The first few lines are worthy of introspection!
A great write on a significant social problem... appreciated this pragmatic write dear madam!
For every action, there is a reaction. Boomerang is a law of nature, the law of retributive justice. You captured the consequences of anger very well. A lovely poem written with insight. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
'Pray thereso by self's conscience For no anger, no sin' Liked these lines the most because anger, being a type of reflex action, requires divine intervention to be vanquished.
Thanks for this wonderful poem Madam. A powerful submission.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
anger does destruct..it too makes us small like fear...bharathiar has said practice anger but that anger is for a common cause...lovely write mam...please read my 'the oldest pair', 'the weapon-ahimsa'