Hazel Durham

Brand New - Poem by Hazel Durham

I lived your dream of faraway places,
Conversations of sunshine forever and smiling faces,
Your appetite for living, drew me closer to you,
Neverending adventures, with a glorious abundance of everything new
Passion for the earth you loved, with your friends high up above,
You generously filled my cup to the overflowing brim,
Encouraging me to stand up and fight to win,
Against all that pain and anxiety inflicted on me,
You spread a velvet red carpet before my feet,
As you brought to life the magic of temples, lagoons and desert sand,
Winds of change, just part of your nomadic life,
Blowing away the entrapment of isolation,
My heart sang a new tune in key,
With renewed zest, hope and love that i could see,
Laughter was always your guest,
Happiness dissolving the conflict and mess,
Safe in your arms for a while,
Giving me space to shine, with every mile,
I could breathe in the scented, intoxicating aroma of the roses you brought,
White, pink, red, golden hue and a smiling you,
The gift you gave me then was precious,
You made me feel so alive and brand new.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is about a time in my life when everything seemed to be going wrong and i felt very isolated and alone, then i met this wonderful man, who became my boyfriend and he did make me feel brand new!

Comments about Brand New by Hazel Durham

  • Akhtar Jawad (3/8/2015 5:52:00 AM)

    Sometimes a painful patch disturbs us mentally but at last it's removed..................10 (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (1/20/2015 7:24:00 AM)

    A great write. You've captured the very essence of what love ought to mean. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (9/27/2014 10:40:00 PM)

    A lovely write with a great message
    Encouraging me to stand up and
    fight to win,10
    (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur (3/25/2014 6:01:00 AM)

    Very nice elaboration about how a good soul can rehabilitate a disturbed and unorganized life to a normal and peaceful one. Kudos to that boy friend and his good soul. (Report) Reply

  • Noreen Carden (9/25/2013 5:39:00 AM)

    My heart sang a new tune in key.A beautiful line Hazel well written
    Really enjoyable read
    (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/24/2013 9:12:00 AM)

    You made me feel so alive and brand new...Wonderful write, Hazel....Filled positivity in me after reading it. Lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Dermot Mc Garthy (3/28/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    They say sentimentality makes bad poetry, but there are some lovely images here that make beautiful music. When was this anyway? (Report) Reply

  • Kanav Justa (12/27/2012 12:49:00 AM)

    You have an amazing style of writing.. loved it (Report) Reply

  • Sandy Player (12/24/2012 3:55:00 PM)

    Written straight from the start like the change has taken place. It must've been a sure change. (Report) Reply

  • April Swan (my Diary Of Bitterweet Chocolate) (12/10/2012 2:15:00 PM)

    I really love this poem! ! Nice dance of words and utmost love expressed in this poem. You must care about who this describes very very much. What A Beautifal poem! (Report) Reply

  • Kevin East (11/1/2012 5:44:00 AM)

    Poignant and rich in a tapestry of emotive words...excellent.. (Report) Reply

  • Jahan Zeb (10/28/2012 9:10:00 AM)

    Life will always offer you reason to be happy. Will written and nicely developed. I liked you reception of your brand new life.
    Good write
    (Report) Reply

  • Yash Shinde (10/28/2012 8:07:00 AM)

    beautiful work........great imagery again....................make sthe reader flow with your poem lovely :) (Report) Reply

  • Adeline Foster (10/2/2012 4:41:00 PM)

    So sad that such feelings don't last. Have you read mine - Death of Innocence -
    (Report) Reply

  • Madhu Mangal Biswas (9/29/2012 12:09:00 PM)

    Makes you feel how special life is! Brilliant hazel! Keep coming! ! (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Seale (9/29/2012 7:56:00 AM)

    Beautiful Write Hazel... Just Beautiful! ! ! ; -)
    (Report) Reply

  • Adeline Foster (9/28/2012 5:16:00 PM)

    Such a heartfelt effort, with happy thoughts. Read mine - Love's Diamond -
    (Report) Reply

  • Mark Trajano (9/27/2012 8:00:00 AM)

    very detailed and makes the reader feel such textures, emotions, and sensations... love it. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (9/25/2012 3:59:00 PM)

    The gift you gave me then was precious,
    You made me feel so alive and brand new
    , . light of love redounds to joy
    heart seems to rise being enamoured heartfelt write,10++, thanks for sharing
    (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (9/24/2012 1:12:00 PM)

    An old thought but in new bottle! Loved this job! (Report) Reply

Read all 24 comments »

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 22, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, October 7, 2012

[Report Error]