I never knew a mere mortal
Could have that effect on me
You've turned my whole world upside down
And made my heart go spinning 'round
I pause to catch my breath,
And find it isn't there.
Your love has left me breathless,
A precious love, so rare.
I pause to catch my breath, and I find it isn't there - cool way of describing love
Thank you, Carl! Your comment was pretty cool, too! : -) We poets are a special breed!
It was a mere mortal's love that took my breath away! Thank you, Louis, for reading & commenting! Be blessed! : -)
Love can do the strangest things. But to be able to condense them beautifully and vividly into a poem, That is extraordinary to do, , , and you have done it so well too!
Many thanks, Sandra, for the sweet compliment! Yes, like the Mickey & Sylvia song in the film 'Dirty Dancing', Love is strange! : -)
well penned dear! true love gives so much joy in our lives! 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
At least once in a lifetime we'd all like this feeling. Especially when it's love involved.
Thanks, Ray! I don't know of too much else except love that could cause this feeling- - except possibly an extreme roller-coaster ride in a theme park! : -D