'You' Poem by Bernard Snyder

Such sweet words, whomever you're writing for is very lucky! Love is a magnificent thing, isn't it?

I like the first 6 lines.... To depict your love's beauty... A lovley poem....

Ah.......it amusing and lovely inked.. :) You traveled in many places and met many great people but when someone travel a feeling in your heart, it made you heart filled more in emotions, sweet emotion..Now i believe you completing all traveling around the world and found the most fascinating one, you can swim deep in feelings, you could feel the breeze and wave without a beach spell, even a closer heart than any people...the one you called 'You' actually the whole package of world tour..i am sure you traveled anywhere with that special 'You' without move even crossing the time..LOve it..this so beautiful and lovely poetry _Unwritten Soul

'but never was ever so breathtaking than the day I first saw you' RAB

Friend that 'YOU' must be an angel of Caribbean sea, capture her soon to your heart before others captivating her. Nice flow of sentiments. I always love the way you express your deep feelings with unimaginable ease and flow.

This man is so profound. He's thought provoking in everything he writes! Bernard I so happy to know you. You deserve the best that God bestow on you, and more !

Critics and naysayers only strengthen a man or woman that truely know them selves, nice poem

I agree with Regina Weaver. This would put smile on any woman's face. Thanks for valuing the other half of you.

Fantastic write Bernard

This put a smile on my face as I read. So far that I have read, your poems are very touching.