I'm here
amongst the huge pile of haiku.
Can you see me?
I hope you do.
I've been buried here
and I don't know what to do.
Each time I post a poem..
it gets buried by haiku! !
I like your poem(I think!) . Luckily haiku are short so the digging out shouldn't require much effort, no matter how big the pile! -Rick :)
Mary, , , :) You have said it well here. Same thing has happened to me. Everytime i post a poem, it gets buried by a pile of haiku :) . Nice poem.
Funny stuff, Mary! With so many personal and serious pieces, it's nice to catch a glimpse of your humor! ! Brian
MARY...SO GLAD TO HAVE YOU BACK WHERE YOU ROCK SO WELL HAIKU IS THE SIMPLEST LOOKING VERSE FORM THAT REQUIRES THE MOST COMPLEX OF IMAGE CONCEPT, AS A PITCTORIAL STORY UNIQUELY UNFOLDS IN 17 SYLLABLES....YOUR WORK IS ESPECIALLY UNIQUE AS IT IS A HAIKU ON ITSELF...A DIAMOND CHIP EXAMPLE OF CONTEMPORARY FORM....QUITE CLEVER INDEED, MARY''''''''''''''FRANK
I dug your verse out Shovelled away all the soil And enjoyed your wit
Ah yes, but message always comes across loud and near. Love Duncan
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Mary First instinct-write you haiku, then send you shovel, or both in one. I don't particularly like Haiku, but I have to admit I wrote a boatload of them-a good focusing exercise. Thanks for the smile. Phillip Michael Sawatzky