Curtains of water
Create music for the soul
Make our spirits soar.
Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
Nice senryu. Music make our souls soar. Why not that of water cascade too? ...10
Rose Marie you had me sold with just the title alone a great enchanting word. Then your a great, well written and uplifting beautiful poem follows it. 10++ and added to my treasure chest. Thank for sharing your gemstone of a poem. Take care.
A captivating write. There is always something so soothing about a waterfall.
Fantastic and true! .. Such beautifully beautifully painted imagery and spirit to this! .. Awesome! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++
Often we are enamored by the sight of falling cascades. The music and the visual impact it creates will gladden anyone's heart! When it falls from a flat wider precipice, it looks like curtains of water! Love the usage... 'curtains of water'!
Curtains of water + music for the soul = harmonica .... Excellent masterpiece
A transparent and poignant verse that sheds light on the close relationship between the nice voice and the soul, between water and life, between music and spirits, short but deep poetry with multiple connotations. Well done and we wish you every success and a good health 10/10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The sound of waterfall warms the heart and soul. Wonderful haiku, dear ate Rose...10++❤️❤️❤️