It is raining again
In Detroit tonight, Susan.
I happen to think
It is pretty,
As pretty as you,
As pretty
As a hundred girls
Laughing in the park.
A hundred girls laughing in the park is a most beautiful sight. Thank you, Uriah.
it's a nice sentiment, very simple, not ostentatious or over the top. I for one adore the simple things like listening to laughter or watching the rain with your lover (not that i have *sigh*) . Although i don't enjoy cats that much...i'm allergic to them >_< but anyway, i love this. =D love you, eni da kid
I love rain! I think there are very few things more beautiful than the rain. Your poetry would be right up there though. Great little poem Uriah. Sincerely, Mary
still romantic Uriah? :) I always enjoy your poems, they are always so peaceful.. HBH
When do the cats come in Uriah, or are they locked out for the night. Please put a nice cat in the poem too. Nice write. Love Ernestine XXX
good stuff...you always write well too...better than I. The power of beauty that you convey in a short poem is amazing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What A lovely heart you have, to see with such a wonderful perspective on things, What a gift, try never to loose it, Love Duncan X