Celebration Poem by Ayi Escalona

Hello Ariel, How are you, this is very enjoyable.. Excellent! ! Carolyn

Good poem here Ariel you do have a way with words

I love the opening lines. Flickers of silver lights transversed the skies... good thoughts put into pen... however the middle of the poem, was a little weak imagery-wise. It seems like you can write a lot of good images into your poetry, but it was a little weask in the middle... but beautiful poetry. Glad to have read your work. ~Namita

Hi, dear, freinds in poetry. Well, you have a good style. I like your poem. Its true, I got lot of poems here for this is my way of relaxing and expressing my views in life.

Beautiful piece of thoughtful poetry! Ariel this poem is written so simply but with many meanings and depth behind your words.I love the way you structured this poem and I look forward to reading more of your work soon! Take care of U... =Shelley=

This poem is all about hope for a lost world. A wonderful message. Thanks.

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wow very enjoyable, i loved the imagery in the beginning. Nice piece. Sydney

Fine reminder of what Christmas is all about. good write

An interesting, well-written read. Glad I stumbled up on it.