Choices Poem by Bonnie Collins

Choices

Rating: 5.0


I would rather live with your memory
than to have you with your fruitless
rose petels devour me

We shared a short lifetime of Happy Memories
Please lets keep it our Secret

No one will ever know, except
2 Hearts who learned a Little Too Late........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tracker Ogryphon 24 February 2008

Very strong and to the point. Thanks Tracker

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Craig Anderson 07 February 2008

An exceptional write. Truly engaging. Regards. Craig.

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Joseph Enright 01 February 2008

This touched me right to my very marrow.I could almost feel your pain.Those of us who have been there can identify.

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Ivan Donn Carswell 28 January 2008

An aptly titled reverie of no regrets. The poem is spot on, brief, powerful and poignant. Rgds, Ivan

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Alison Cassidy 17 January 2008

A poignant example of less is more. 'A short lifetime of memories.' is superb. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Naidz Ladia 27 May 2009

bad memories should be left behind...continue to live for a bright tomorrow, , there, true love waits.., this lines contain honest words, , , a smart work..naizz

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I loved your poem. And we share the same birthday except for the year! Smile! Your poem was well written! Great Job

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Kesav Easwaran 01 November 2008

happiness learnt late...a poem talking frank and honest...good piece10

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Stacey Watts 16 September 2008

I can so feel this poem.. It is amazing the choices we have and the ones we make in haste, the ones we make out of loyalty in love. Very wonderful poem.

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Robert Sheridan 14 September 2008

Bonnie, A short, succinct piece... exceptional all the way! Robert

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Bonnie Collins

Bonnie Collins

Middletown New York
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