Thumblike cicadas
Smashed into the clean windshield
Of my new blue car
Splattered their sticky liquid
Ended their defeaning buzz.
Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
It happens! A Tanka worded powerfully. I can visualise it.
Oh yes this happens. They have their fate written like this. So, we should admire we are better humans.
That was supposed to be as much as i like cicadas heh oops! .. God bless! ..
Heh, As I like cicadas it's kinda humorous! .. Sorry to hear about your car heh and the cicadas too! .. Excellent expressions! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++
The sound and the ensuing silence provide dramatic imagery. Well done!
but still a very dirty result but not that splattered sticky liquid.Ours here they dried at once but still very dirty. fascinatingly worded.5 Stars full
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I would like to translate this poem
Awesome....They are loud enough to seek attention and at times irritate.5****