Clouds - Tanka Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Clouds - Tanka

Rating: 5.0


Dark clouds like cobra
Invade the beautiful sky
Create a mournful day
Make me tremble and afraid
As they dance in the vast sky.


Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 01 April 2021

I love this poem Rose Marie! Fantastic work!

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Rebecca Navarre 03 April 2021

Very heart moving, very powerfully painted and expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 October 2022

I call your dark clouds as metaphor. This Tanka is technically perfect and thoroughly poetic with social implications. A brilliant write. Top score.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 01 August 2021

Indeed, the dark clouds are every depressing! Vivid and apt Tanka

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M Asim Nehal 06 April 2021

Aptly defined the King Cobra, Liked the metaphor.5***

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 04 April 2021

A beautiful day gone bad is described here so vividly.5 stars!

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Anjandev Roy 04 April 2021

Create a mournful day.....significant....thank u.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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