Rose Marie Juan-austin
Laoag City, Philippines
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Clouds - Tanka

Rating: 5.0
Dark clouds like cobra
Invade the beautiful sky
Create a mournful day
Make me tremble and afraid
As they dance in the vast sky.

Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
M Asim Nehal 06 April 2021
Aptly defined the King Cobra, Liked the metaphor.5***
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Evelyn Judy Buehler 04 April 2021
A beautiful day gone bad is described here so vividly.5 stars!
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Anjandev Roy 04 April 2021
Create a mournful day.....significant....thank u.
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Rebecca Navarre 03 April 2021
Very heart moving, very powerfully painted and expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++
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Kostas Lagos 01 April 2021
I love this poem Rose Marie! Fantastic work!
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