Dark clouds like cobra
Invade the beautiful sky
Create a mournful day
Make me tremble and afraid
As they dance in the vast sky.
Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
Very heart moving, very powerfully painted and expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++
I call your dark clouds as metaphor. This Tanka is technically perfect and thoroughly poetic with social implications. A brilliant write. Top score.
Indeed, the dark clouds are every depressing! Vivid and apt Tanka
A beautiful day gone bad is described here so vividly.5 stars!
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I would like to translate this poem
I love this poem Rose Marie! Fantastic work!