Climax Of A Long Story Poem by Naseer Ahmed Nasir

Here probably u are talking about infidelity! How easily people forget each other. May be I'm wrong.

between the scent of the mud and the rain's beauty born a baby beautiful poem..

I will write End of a long story. Good one

: THE HEAVY RAIN DEMOLISHED MY MUD GRASS HOME PEOPLE ARE HAPPY THAT FLOWER WOULD BLOOM'GOOD POEM SIR

the feelings on this poem are truly genuine and full of emotion! marvelous!

lovely write............. i still cherish your poem on peace...........

Wow, this says so much. So powerful.... I guess she had a change of heart!

A very fine little poem: an old story told in a fresh image. This is a jewel, both for the writer and the translator.

Another excellent write - so typical of today when love and pain thereof is a passing game for some

its really a long story told in a few words. it evokes rural images i am so familiar with. tThe pain, transient nature of relationships, break up all expressed so vividly like a painting in words. In spite of myself I even smiled at your choice of metaphors... Mamta