Cloud King Poem by lady grace

Cloud King

Rating: 4.9


an emperor from heaven
darken the clear blue sky
scatter and form rainwater
wet the dry emerald eyes…

he is the king among the kings
the ruler in the sky
proud but not arrogant
love.concern is in his eyes…

foliage grows in better place
where sunlight, precipitations are well spread
plant life blooms to its fullest
bush wood grows its best…

cloud king as what we call him
the name commended in the crowd
the winner himself, the champion he is
in painting he was so proud..


(this is for adean, a science camp winner ”comic strip”…..my son, .am so proud of you even if father is not with us anymore, he sees you from heaven.we all love you happy birthday on july 31..)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 29 July 2009

Imaginative and very artisitc too.Good job Grace.

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Shashendra Amalshan 29 July 2009

Oh Happy birth day INDEED! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! this is great my dear Lady Grace...i liked the narrative style you used to here.. sort of entertaining read.. with lvs shan

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Surya . 28 July 2009

wonderful thoughts.wonderful expression.nice to remember voted10 surya

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Catrina Heart 27 July 2009

This was a very lovely and sweet tribute composition for your dearest son Adean...Congratulations to both of you my friend...God Bless you always! ! !

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Rafique Farooqi 27 July 2009

Well written grace........you are wonderful in expressing....

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Roland Bastien 13 August 2009

I felt floating like a cloud when I read that poem....magic-

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Chris Mendros 04 August 2009

Touching tribute to an undoubtedly fine and gifted son. Mournful but proud, expressing emotions difficult to serve with mere words. Well done.

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Ken E Hall 02 August 2009

What a nice way to give a tribute to your son with a blessing from heaven for that is what your poem is and to add 3 letters to your name ful, graceful ++++++10 regards

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Rafique Farooqi 31 July 2009

Very very beautiful...write.........Grace......... Thunderclap in the silence....xinia

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Aijaz Asif 31 July 2009

another marvelous write from you ma'am and a very beautiful gift a true gift indeed which can never be forgotten and always be remembered....thanks for sharing 10++++ rgds asif

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