Aufie Zophy

Gold Star - 27,982 Points (18 October 1964)

Clouds In The Desert - Poem by Aufie Zophy

When we look at the world,
it seems we live in a desert:
heat of loneliness, of greed

But above the sand in our desert,
hang some soft, beautiful clouds.

Soon the clouds will rain out
with droplets of 'nice and kind'
drops of generosity and peace

Blades of grass will grow on the sand.
first a few, but it will keep raining.
Magic drops turning into more grass.

Soon the sand will be covered
by an adorable carpet of grass
from which flowers of love spout

A magnificent garden of happiness
for everyone, in the world to enjoy.
The hot sand of greed gone for ever!

Topic(s) of this poem: kindness, love, peace


Poet's Notes about The Poem

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Let us generate each at least a droplet a day 😉

Comments about Clouds In The Desert by Aufie Zophy

  • Yiyan HanYiyan Han (1/20/2018 6:31:00 AM)

    Wonderful and meaningful
    Yes, let turn the desert into oasis
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  • David WoodDavid Wood (1/5/2018 10:47:00 AM)

    It reminds me when I was in the Negev desert it rained and all the desert flowers came out. Lovely poem brought back memories.10. (Report)Reply

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (12/25/2017 6:10:00 AM)

    Wonderful like you always share...tenderness is part of your poem i must say that! :) (Report)Reply

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  • Valsa GeorgeValsa George (12/17/2017 11:48:00 PM)

    Let the rain of love and compassion fall down in torrents to make our arid land once more fertile! A poem so positive showering down a lot of positive energy! A 10 (Report)Reply

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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (12/15/2017 2:16:00 AM)

    Aufie, such a brilliant write..10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • Laurie Van Der HartLaurie Van Der Hart (12/15/2017 1:29:00 AM)

    This is a beautiful sustained metaphor, Aufie! It's true - those clouds are there and nothing can stop them from raining down. We shall indeed enjoy a garden of happiness. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 15, 2017

Poem Edited: Friday, December 15, 2017


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